Before
The crunching of chips
The calm chatter
Warming up
The musical scale
The practice of a piece
The harmonious chords
Full run through
The silence in the wings
The rehearsed routes
The moving songs
The real smiles
Get notes
The possibility for improvements
The pencil checks
The thankings of "you"
After
The zipping of parkas
The quiet humming of tunes
I used cacophony, sibilance, and euphony in this poem to represent the various order that occurs in rehearsal. Before rehearsal, there is barely any order, cacophony. While warming up and getting notes, there is some order, sibilance. But during a run though, there is the most order, euphony.
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That was a real nice poem. You were really able to create an image and a good pattern.
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